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By: CederikBenoot  - 73 month(s) ago

Dear Maxime, please find my feedback below: - maybe adjust your table of content a little bit - additional slide presenting your expat - you have a few very nice visual slides, in the other slides, try to cut a little text - it's good that u make a conclusion for each part - good comparison of article and interview - good that u show your used sources in general good job, well done!

By: CederikBenoot  - 73 month(s) ago

Dear Killian, please find my feedback below: - good introduction - nice visual presentation - good overview of used sources - good country comparison but try to cut some text - try to talk a bit louder - good usage of introducing sentences - in general good structure but too much text, your audience will be reading too much instead of listening to you - good conclusion well done!

By: CederikBenoot  - 73 month(s) ago

Dear Michiel, please find my feedback below: - good overview of used sources - good use of graphs (China & dimensions of Hofstede) - during slide 5, you talk a lot, try to use more visual elements or add more structure to keep your audience their attention - in general, try to add a little more structure - in your conclusion (slide 10) you talk about the beauty of Shangai, try to make this visual while you talk about it - good pace of talking and emphasizing

By: glenn291220  - 73 month(s) ago

Dear Maxim, It's nice that you give a conclusion for each part of your presentation. Just make sure that you adapt your text so that it's applicable for a presentation. For example, in the beginning you say "In this paper..."; change this into "During this presentation..." In addition, maybe change the pictures from the conclusion slides as they look a bit outdated. Other than that, very interesting presentation. Good job Maxim!

By: glenn291220  - 73 month(s) ago

Dear Maxim, It's nice that you give a conclusion for each part of your presentation. Just make sure that you adapt your text so that it's applicable for a presentation. For example, in the beginning you say "In this paper..."; change this into "During this presentation..." In addition, maybe change the pictures from the conclusion slides as they look a bit outdated. Other than that, very interesting presentation. Good job Maxim!

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