Thesis:
Thesis We think children should be allowed to talk in the hallways Therefore we should have a system where teachers give us a pass to speak in the hallways We say this because talking in the hallways will make us more social which will help us in our further life
Reason:
Reason Not being able to talk in the hallway is a form of oppressing the freedom of speech We think that talking in the hall (with the consent of a teacher in the form of a pass) is fine with permission.
Fact:
Fact According to www.fitday.com if you are average height and weight for a middle school student you can lose 44 calories per hour when talking
Another fact:
Another fact According to http://public-groups.nea.org the idea of a perfect straight silent line in the hall scares certain teachers like this man who says, “The idea of a "silent, single file line" kind of scares me. It seems artificial, imposed. I have seen photos of young Nazi's and young Communists, and they were very orderly, very soldier-like, in that same kind of "imposed" order.”
Argument :
Argument Some people might say that talking in the hallways disrupts class and makes people sad And according to www.byzantinecommunications.com talking in the hallways is bad because you could miss something a direction given by your teacher
Counter argument:
Counter argument Talking in the hallways with a pass or permission could be a good system in our school because we can’t talk without the teacher saying yes This point is a strong one because both teachers and students would be satisfied with it for a long time
Closing :
Closing For all these reasons I am sure we have impressed upon you that we believe you can talk In the hallways with a pass You should all consider our great idea and ask your teachers about it and who knows they might say yes
The End:
The End