moa adventure stories.

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Year 1 poetic writing

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Our Moa Adventures. We decided to write our own adventure stories using our stuffed Moa and ourselves as characters. We made sure our stories had a beginning, an exciting middle and, an end. Here are the stories written by 5 of our budding, young ,fiction writers . Arabella Alysha Bailee Caleb Maximus

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Author. Arabella Bang ! Crash ! Page 1

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… me up, it opened its mouth. I came down into its mouth and it chewed me up. “ Mmmmmm delicious “ he said. “ Ooooh. That’s yummy !” Page 3

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Page 4 It ran and ran to its family. It got some more people for dinner. Author. Arabella

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Page 1 It was a sunny day. Suddenly, I saw a ginormous moa. I screamed. I could smell the yucky smell. When I looked behind me, I saw the moas mouth with a yucky breath. The Moa Author. Alysha

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I ran. He ran too! I ran so fast that he couldn’t get me. He tried to scratch me. He tried to run fast. “ Aaaaaah!!!’ I screamed.

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!!! . . . , Author. Alysha

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The Moa Ride. Author. Bailee Page 1

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... running down to my feet and the breath was smelly. I hid behind the humongus tree. He nearly fell on me but all along he was friendly. He picked me up! I thought that he was going to eat me but he picked me up and put me on his back. Page 2

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It was fun riding him. I felt happy again. I asked my mum if I could keep him and she said yes I could ! I built a house for my moa. I feed him plants. He likes eating plants too, but no people. We ate cake. “Mmmmm. Delicious!” Page 3 Author. Bailee

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Page 1 The Moa. Author. Caleb

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... I looked back. I looked at its throat. I saw a fish and a piece of meat and then it spat me out. Page 3 Author. Caleb

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Page 1 The Moa. Author. Maximus Page 1

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Author. Maximus Page 2