Slide1 : 书面表达专练
描写某个地方
（Describing a place）
Slide2 : 常用表达法(Useful expressions)
1.所处位置（Location）
A.Our school lies near/behind/in front of/by the side of…/between/among…
B.The temple stands at the foot of/on the top of…
C.Standing on the top of the mountain, the temple has experienced many changes in this area.
There stands an old temple near the river.
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2.周边环境（Surroundings）
The beautiful town is located/situated on the west of the lake/to the west of the mountain/in the west of the province.
West of the city stands a tall building.
Surrounded by mountains on three sides, the small village faces a clear river on the east.
Slide4 : 3.人口（Population）
Japan has a small population of …
China is a developing
country ,with a population of 130 million.
The population here is increasing year by year.
Eighty percent of the population here are farmers.
Slide5 : 4.面积（Area）
Tiananmen Square, the largest square in the world, covers an area of …
Tiananmen Square, covering an area of…,is the largest square in the world.
This square is 2000 meters long and 1500 meters wide.
Our school , which takes up 63 thousand square kilometers, is very large in size.
Slide6 : 5.历史（History）
China has a history of over 5000 years.
Egypt is an Arabian country with a long history.
Built in the16th century, the castle has witnessed too much coming and going in history.
Slide7 : 名胜（Places of interest）
In Sydney, there are many places of interest , such as the Opera House.
The Opera House in Sydney is one of the most well-known places of interest in the world.
Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest, among which is the Opera House.
Slide8 : 7.特色(Something Special)
Development,
best season
weather
The United States of America : The United States of America The United States of America is a developed country. It lies in the central part of North America. To the north is Canada and to the south is Mexico. The Atlantic Ocean is to the east the Pacific Ocean is to the west. Being the 4th largest country in the world, it has an area of 9.36 million square kilometers. The country has a lot of
Slide10 : lakes, mountains and the world famous river -----the Mississipi. The USA is made up of 50 states, with Washington D.C. as its capital. The country has a population of about 236 million and English is the official language.
Slide11 : 写作练习
根据以下内容写一篇100词左右的说明文，标题为“Australia”。
1)、澳大利亚位于太平洋的西侧，是大洋洲（Oceania）最大的国家，面积760万平方公里。
2)、人口稀少，只有1，000多万，多数集中在东部沿海地区。
3)、首都堪培拉（Canberra）风景秀丽。
4)、悉尼（Sydney）是澳大利亚最大城市。有许多名胜，其中悉尼歌剧院（Opera House）闻名于世。2000年奥运会就是在悉尼举行的。
描写育才中学的地理方位 : 描写育才中学的地理方位
请同学们指出以下句子中的错误: : 请同学们指出以下句子中的错误: 1. When you through the gate, you will see grass and flowers everywhere. When you walk / come through the gate, you will see grass and flowers everywhere. 遗漏动词
The Chengxi River outside the school gate. : The Chengxi River outside the school gate. The Chengxi River lies / is / runs / flows outside the school gate. Outside the school / In front of the school lies / is / runs / flows the Chengxi River. 遗漏动词
3. Yucai Middle School , which near the Chengxi River, is very large. : 3. Yucai Middle School , which near the Chengxi River, is very large. Yucai Middle School , which is / lies near the Chengxi River, is very large. 4. Yucai Middle School looks very beautiful.
It next to the Chengxi River. Yucai Middle School looks very beautiful.
It lies next to the Chengxi River.
缺少谓语动词
5. On it right stand a building. : 5. On it right stand a building. On its right stands a building. 6. There are a library building and a teaching building between the two flowerbeds. There is a library building and a teaching building between the two flowerbeds. 主谓不一致 注意谓语动词单复数
7. Come through the school gate, there are some flowers in front of you. : 7. Come through the school gate, there are some flowers in front of you. Coming through the school gate, you will see some flowers in front of you. Come through the school gate, and you will see some flowers in front of you. 8. We study in the school is really a good thing. It is good for us to study in the school. 句子结构错误
9. Let me talk you about Yucai Middle School. : 9. Let me talk you about Yucai Middle School. Let me tell you about Yucai Middle School. 10. Walk along, and you will look at a gym. Walk along, and you will see a gym. 选词错误
11. On your left side was the teaching building. : 11. On your left side was the teaching building. On your left side is the teaching building. 时态错误 12. In one side, has our reading room. On the other side, has our studying room. In the south of the school, there has dinner room. In the east of these there has a playground. 中式表达法 13. They very like the school.
正确表达 : 正确表达 12. On one side stands our reading room. On the other side stands our studying room. In the south of the school, there is a dining room. In the east of these there is a playground where we usually play basketball and football.
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Let me tell you something about Yucai Middle School. Yucai Middle School , which lies near the Chengxi River, is very large and beautiful. When you come through the gate of Yucai Middle school, you will see grass and flowers everywhere. There is a library building and a teaching building between the two flowerbeds. In the south of the school stands a dining room. In the east of these stands a playground where we usually play basketball and football.
Slide22 : Shaoxing is located in the eastern part of Zhejiang province,
where is the beautiful, rich and popular Yangtz Delta, next to
Hangzhou bay to the north, linked with Simingshan Mount
to the south, joined with Shangyu city to the west and
connected with Ningbo city to the east. With the population
of 830,000, Yuyao covers an area of 1,527 square kilometres,
which is the heart of Ningbo-Shaoxing Plain. Yuyao always enjoys the reputation of “the famous state in
the southeast”(东南名邑), “the well-known literature state”
(文化名城) and so on. Example is located in to the north to the west With covers Ningbo-Shaoxing enjoys next to with
Slide23 : 美文欣赏（Enjoy Reading）
Santa Fe, the capital of New Mexico, U.S.A., is in the central part of the state, on the Santa Fe River, which flows into the Rio Grande 35 kilometers west of the city. More than two thousand meters above sea level, it lies in the Sangre de Cristo Mountains with the Ortiz Mountains to the southeast. 幻灯片 3 本篇文段选自1993年高考阅读理解部分。全文仅用205个单词就向读者清晰地描画了Santa Fe这个地方的地理位置、人口状况、资源特色，特别是用较大篇幅叙述了此处的历史变迁等地方特征。全文有详有略，重点突出。
Slide24 : Santa Fe was founded in 1609 by the Spanish on an old Indian village. In 1680 the Indians seized the place but only held it for twelve years before the Spanish retook it. the city remained under Spanish rule until Mexico won its independence in 1821. From then on it was a Mexican city until 1846 when it was taken over by U.S.A. troops. 幻灯片 4 文中追溯历史的片（划线部分）尤其值得借鉴；学习时请注意其中表示时间的连词、介词，几个动词的用法以及主动、被动时态交互应用的特色。
Slide25 : With a population of 48,953,Santa Fe is now the second largest city in the state. Because of its sunny weather, rich history and surrounding mountains, it is a good place for holiday makers. Besides hunting and skating in the mountains people enjoy shopping in the Indian and Spanish shops, which brings a large income to the city every year. 幻灯片 5 另外，同位语the capital of New Mexico, U.S.A.,介词结构With a population of, Because of, besides等的使用亦使文段显得紧凑、连贯。
Slide26 : In summer there is an international opera season when operas are shown in a partly- roofed, open air theatre daily for people from all over the world. (Adapted from MET1993) 幻灯片 2 推荐背诵文段
Slide27 : 习作点评
Australia, to the west of the Pacific Ocean, is the largest country in Oceania, which is about 7,600,000 square kilometers.
Although Australia is so large a country, it has a sparse population, which is only more than 10 million. And most of the people live together in the East Part by the sea.
Australia is an attractive place. Canberra is the capital, and it has very charming scenery. But it is not the largest city in Australia. In fact, Sydney is the largest one. There are a lot of places of intrest. Especially the Opera House is so famous that almost everybody living in the world knows it. And the 24th Olympic Games was held in Sydney in 2000.So you can see that how important the Sydney is.
In a word, if you want to travel abroad，Australia is a right place.
But it is not the largest city in Australia. In fact, Sydney is the largest one. There are a lot of places of intrest. Especially the Opera House is so famous that almost everybody living in the world knows it. And the 24th Olympic Games was held in Sydney in 2000.So you can see that how important the Sydney is.
In a word, if you want to travel abroad，Australia is a right place.
应加上标题Australia
此句后应加上in size
together为赘词
此处But及下文In fact过渡自然巧妙
interest拼写错误
准确
简洁
was held应为were held
专有名词Sydney前不应加the
结尾自然
Slide28 : 参考范文
Australia, the largest country in Oceania, lies on the west coast of the Pacific. It covers an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. It has a small population of over 10 million. Most of its population live in the east of the country by the sea. Canberra, the capital of Australia, is a beautiful city. Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest. The Opera House is well known all over the world. The 2000 Olympic Games were held in Sydney.